Thursday, January 30, 2014

January 29th, 2014

1/29/14

In Class:
Journal--  Describe your ideal birthday celebration, imagining that you have infinite resources and human abilities. 

Distributed and reviewed missing work reports. Midterm grades close next Thursday, so be sure to make up any assignments and journal entries you've missed!

10 minutes of independent, guided GMX work.

Lesson on Planning:
When writing an essay, you will see much stronger results if you plan before writing. Take, as an analogy, a puzzle: if you start putting your puzzle together before you have all the pieces, the process will be much more arduous and less effective. Planning before you write increases the number of puzzle pieces you have access to.
     * Planning always starts with a working thesis statement. (See prior lessons on constructing thesis statements.

While there are many different methods for planning, three common methods are the mind-map, the outline, and the flowchart.

     Ex. Thesis: Tacos are an ideal meal because they are nutritious, delicious, and customizable.


* Mind-map (web): graphically represents ideas and connects related thoughts. Center 'bubble' should be the topic with supporting information branching off to the edges. Works best for those with strong spatial reasoning skills.






* Outline: linearly represents ideas in numerical order. First paragraph should be an introduction (including your thesis) and the last paragraph should be a conclusion (including a re-phrased thesis). Each body paragraph should follow a 'stoplight' style organization, connecting back to the thesis in the last sentence. Works best for those with strong mathematical/quantitative reasoning skills.


 


* Flowchart: graphically represents ideas in a sequence (hybrid of mind-map and outline). All body paragraphs should tie back to the thesis and build toward a conclusion. 



Timed Writing #3:
In “The M-Word: Why It Matters to Me,” Andrew Sullivan discusses the separation of ‘marriage’ and ‘gay marriage.’ In “Love is All You Need?,” writers K. Rocco Shields and David Tillman invert standards of heteronormativity*. In an organized and thoughtful essay, respond to one of the following prompts about sexuality in today’s society:

     a) Describe an experience in which you witnessed prejudiced behavior regarding sexuality or gender identity. What caused this situation? What does it reflect about our culture as a whole?
      b) By comparing “The M-Word,” “Love is All You Need
?,” and the following quote, reflect on standards of sexual normalcy in our culture. “It always seemed to me a bit pointless to disapprove of homosexuality. It’s like disapproving of rain.” - Francis Maude

     c) How important is sexuality or gender to a person’s identity? In what circumstances might sexuality be considered more or less significant? How does a heteronormative culture affect identity?
              OR      
     d) Using examples from “The M-Word” and “Love is All You Need?,” discuss the emotional impact of growing up outside of the standards of ‘normalcy.’                      

*heteronormativity: a prejudiced worldview that considers heterosexuality to be the standard or normalcy by which sexuality and gender are measured. Includes distinct and specific ideas about sex, sexuality, gender identity, and gender roles. 


 
Exit ticket: What is one thing you're looking forward to?

Homework:
Finish TW #3.
Catch up on missing work and journal entries. 

Monday, January 27, 2014

January 27th, 2014

1/27/14

In Class:
Journal--  Free-write, using the following quote as a jumping off point: “Success is not final; failure is not fatal. It is the courage to continue that counts.” - Winston Churchill
10 minutes of independent, guided GMX work time.
Lesson on Thesis Statements:
Reminder--thesis statement: one to three sentences which expresses your main point, argument, or idea.
While there are many different ways to construct a thesis statement, another strategy we will learn is the T3 Statement.

T: General topic, position, idea, or argument
3: Three independent but related support ideas or "breakdown points."
      Ex.: T: Wool sweaters are the best. 3: Wool sweaters are fuzzy, warm, and super hip.
      T3: Wool sweaters are the best because they are fuzzy, warm, and super hip.
[Alternatively, you can combine or revise your "3" to be more or fewer than 3. Consider Wool sweaters are the best because they are comfortable and fashionable, or Wool sweaters are the best because they make me feel good and look good.]


Lesson on Paragraph Organization:
Using a T3 statement to outline our paragraph, we can use the "stoplight" method.
       Stop -- Evidence,         Topic Sentence (T3, O/P, etc.) 
detail, or explanation         Main Point #1
    Slow -- Breakdown         
Detail/explanation        
              point                     Main Point #2
         Go -- Topic                
Detail/explanation           
      sentence or thesis        Main Point #3
                                          Detail/explanation
                                          Wrap-up sentence (re-state thesis) OR Transition to next paragraph
                     

      Ex:    Wool sweaters are the best because they are fuzzy, warm, and super hip. Wool sweaters are fun to wear because they are fuzzy and comfortable. They might be itchy sometimes, but they are worth the risk. I also love them for their warmth. Even on a snowy day like today, I stay nice and toasty. Furthermore, they are very fashionable. Everybody knows I look good in a wool sweater. In conclusion, wool sweaters are my favorite because of their comfortable and fashionable attributes.


Preparation for Timed Writing #3. Defined and discussed heteronormativity: a prejudiced worldview that considers heterosexuality to be the standard or normalcy by which sexuality and gender are measured. Includes distinct and specific ideas about sex, sexuality, gender identity, and gender roles.

Screened the first 9 minutes of "All You Need is Love?" and distributed "The M-Word: Why It Matters to Me" by Andrew Sullivan.


Exit ticket: Name one person toward whom you will express gratitude today.


Homework:
Read "The M-Word" and prepare for TW #3.

Sunday, January 26, 2014

January 24th, 2014

1/24/14

In Class:
Journal--  Describe the photo in vivid detail. Imagine yourself in the scene!

10 minutes of independent, guided GMX work.
Lesson on Thesis Statements:

thesis statement: one to three sentences which expresses your main point, argument, or idea. 
             Topic + Stance = Thesis 
   * You can consider your thesis your "So What?" statement. For example, if your topic is snack food, ask yourself, "So what about snack food?" "Cheez-its are the best snack food because they are salty, crunchy, and cheesy."
   * If your essay is a human body, then the thesis is the spine: it supports the functionality of the entire piece, and ultimately, everything connects back to it.

While there are many different ways to construct a thesis statement, one strategy we will learn is the Occasion-Position Statement.
occasion (O): the circumstance, topic, problem, or event that prompts your writing.
position (P): the statement, solution, reaction, or message you are trying to convey.
  -> A position directly, explicitly identifies your point or message. Be clear!
Occasion-Position Statement = [Subordinating Conjunction (see handout)] + [O] + [,] + [P]







Timed Writing #2 - "Salvation" by Langston Hughes
In “Salvation,” Langston Hughes reflects on a specific encounter with religion from his childhood. Reflect on your own interactions with religion in response to one of the following:

     a) Hughes repeats the expression “bring the young lambs to the fold.” What does this imply about conformity, particularly in religious institutions?
     b) Describe an experience in which you’ve had to confront the idea of ‘faith’ (as opposed to ‘fact’ or ‘knowledge’).
     c) Hughes explains that his family and church tried to “save” him at age twelve. When should children be introduced to the ideas of religion, God, and salvation? How should complex and didactic topics like this be approached?
                OR
     d) Read "Sunday Morning Prophecy" by Langston Hughes (handout). How does the mentality of the minister compare to the overall tone of "Salvation"?

Your response does not need to reflect any particular stance on any particular religion, but write with conviction and consider your personal experiences.


Exit ticket: What is your current favorite song?

Homework:
Read Thesis Statement handout and complete the back side on a topic of your choice.
Finish TW #2 by Monday at 10:40.
Catch up on any missing work.








Thursday, January 23, 2014

January 22nd, 2014

1/22/14

In Class:
Journal--  Take a mental inventory of your bedroom or living space. What objects, decorations, etc. do you see around? What do each of these say about your personality, interests, and identity?

10 minutes of independent, guided GMX work.


Lesson on Annotation:
annotation: the process of marking a text to create notes (e.g., underlining, margin notes, stars, etc.).
Why annotate?
Annotation helps us
   - read actively     - keep track of ideas
   - note important information     - remember reactions and thoughts
   - clarify/rephrase difficult texts
Questions to ask yourself when annotating include:


   * What words or expressions do I not yet understand? 
   * What are the main points of this article?    
   * What important information supports the main points? [Who, What, When, Where, Why, How] 
   * What information is missing? What do I need to research more? 
   * Where are the ideas coming from? Can I trust the information? 
   * What thoughts, feelings, and reactions am I experiencing as I read? 
As a class, students read and annotated "Drugs" by Gore Vidal. What key ideas and arguments does Vidal present? How should we read the tone of this essay? What information does Vidal ignore? What emotional and intellectual reactions did you have?

Independently, students annotated one of four selected articles to practice.

Exit ticket: Name one question you should ask yourself when annotating.

Homework:
Read "Salvation" by Langston Hughes for Timed Writing #2.

Finish your in-class annotation practice.

Monday, January 20, 2014

January 15th, 2014

1/15/14

In Class:
Journal--  Write a story or poem using at least 6 of the words below:

     - rain          - time          - release 
     - lie          - skin          - help 
     - scamper        - parachute          - defenestrate 
     - fluffy          - recipe          - disastrous

Note: school will not be in session on Monday, January 20th, 2014. Next week, Elements of Language Arts will meet on Wednesday and Friday.


12 minutes of independent, guided GMX work.
Instructor collected 4+ exercises from each student. 



Lesson introducing the Six Traits of Writing, then focusing on the nature and importance of organization.







Timed Writing #1 - "The Joy of Reading and Writing: Superman and Me" by Sherman Alexie

 
Remember: The first timed writing is to set a baseline for yourself. It should be challenging. You will see your skills and scores improve throughout the course of the term as you learn new strategies.



Exit ticket: Who is someone you can always turn to?



Homework:
Read annotation handout and annotate the paragraph on the back.


Tuesday, January 14, 2014

January 13th, 2014

1/13/14

In Class:
Journal--  What does it mean to be a “reader” or “writer?” Do you consider yourself either (or both)? What contexts in life would you need to know how to read and/or write? 


Discussed this course's focus on communication and the power of words. Screen two videos on the theme of “The Power of Words”:     Video 1
   Video 2
Discussed the purpose of bettering our literacy (reading, writing, speaking, & listening) for social change and growth.



Reviewed syllabus and class expectations.


Introduced GMX Workbooks and explained assignment.


Introduced Timed Writing assignment and first reading, "The Joy of Reading and Writing: Superman and Me" by Sherman Alexie.


Assigned "Reading is Fundamental" by Jeffrey Heffron and guided notes.


Exit ticket: If I do one thing to be successful this block, it will be...


Homework:
Complete "Reading is Fundamental" guided notes.
Choose a book to read.
Read "The Joy of Reading and Writing" by Wednesday.

Syllabus -- The Elements of Language Arts


The Elements of Language Arts
January 13th – March 7th, 2013
MW 10:40 - 12:10, Room 1
Shane Abrams

Course Texts
The Bedford Guide for College Writers, 8th ed. Ed. X.J. Kennedy, Dorothy M. Kennedy, and Marcia F. Muth. Boston: Bedford, 2008. Print.
Note: the vast majority of course texts will be provided in handouts; a folder, binder, or other organizational system will be necessary.
The following blog will also serve as a resource for disseminating materials and texts: 

Course Description
The aim of this course is to help develop students’ rudimentary language skills to proficiency in reading, writing, speaking, and listening. The curriculum is designed to prepare students for high school and college level writing experiences through frequent practice of reader-response, individual analysis, and class discussion.

Learning Outcomes and Essential Questions
During this course, students will develop the ability to…
·       write both brief and extended responses to a variety of texts and media.
·       demonstrate growth in expressive and receptive capabilities through reading, writing, speaking, and listening.
·       explain the characteristics of a variety of writing and speaking styles.
·       demonstrate the ability to utilize different styles for different purposes and audiences.
We will aim to explore—perhaps even answer—some of the following questions:
·       How are reading, writing, speech, and listening related and independent?
·       What importance do reading and writing hold in society?
·       Why are reading, writing, speaking, and listening essential to all lifestyles, careers, and experiences?

Outcomes Assessment
The following assignments will be used to assess students’ progress toward learning outcomes: participation & attendance (graded daily); daily in-class journals (graded twice per block); weekly timed writing assignments; in-class and out-of-class assignments; a mid-term writing assignment; and a final reader-response compilation. Additionally, other artistic or academic assignments will be collected and assessed when the instructor sees appropriate.

Classroom Policy – Grading, Attendance, and Comportment

*** My classroom is a place for personal growth, be it intellectual, emotional, or otherwise. I expect all students to help me maintain an environment conducive to such growth. All students are entitled to the right to improve and evolve, and no person should infringe upon this right in any manner. My classroom will be a safe and respectful environment for my students to exercise their right to learn. ***


Attendance and Breaks
Students should attend all classes as possible. There will be only 14 sessions of The Elements of Language Arts; each absence is detrimental to learning potential. I will not deduct points for absences, whether they are excused or unexcused.

Even though I will not lose any points for being absent, I am responsible for any assignments I miss, including journal entries.
If a student misses class, I advise visiting the course blog – http://boulderprepdadvlit.blogspot.com/— to see what she or he missed and what she or he needs in order to catch up. If you know in advance that you will miss a class, please consult with me beforehand.

Students are expected to arrive to class on time. This means that each student should be sitting at a desk with all necessary materials, including any assigned reading for the class, ready to begin working at 10:40. This does not mean walking from the Commons to the classroom at 10:40; this does not mean arriving at 10:39 and leaving to use the bathroom until 10:45. In regards to individual breaks, you should think of yourselves as adults during this class:

I will leave the classroom only when I must and only when it is appropriate.


Grades
Grades for The Elements of Language Arts will be calculated on a points-based scale; i.e., each assignment, including long-term projects and daily participation grades, will be valued at a certain number of points possible. Over the 8-week course, points possible will amount to roughly 1200-1400 points. At any time, a student may request his or her grade, and I will do my best to provide a response in a timely fashion.

Extra credit will not be provided, barring unforeseen, extenuating circumstances; therefore, students are expected to complete each and every assignment to the best of their respective abilities. Opportunity for success will not be withheld: each student will have the chance to excel, in terms of grades and personal growth. However, the burden lies upon the student to optimize these opportunities.

Course Specific Grades:

   Daily participation     10  pts. / day
  Daily journal entries   140  pts.
 Weekly timed writing assignments   240  pts.
  General assignments   10-20  pts. / each (approx. 300 pts. total)
   Midterm writing project     200  pts.
 Final reader-response compilation   300  pts.
                  * see particular assignment sheets for specific breakdown and expectations


                  Miscellaneous
Academic Honesty
Plagiarism and cheating, whether intentional or unintentional, shall not be tolerated. Every student is expected to follow any and all codes of academic honesty endorsed by Boulder Preparatory High School.

Electronic Devices
In order to contribute to a classroom environment which respects everyone’s educational opportunities, students are asked to refrain from the use of cell phones and other unnecessary and/or distracting devices during class time. When you are in class, regardless of the nature of the activity, your cell phone should be put away, your music device shut off, and any other devices out of sight. Devices that seem to be distracting any student will be impounded for the remainder of the period.


Materials Needed
Please bring these things to class every day:
Writing materials (pen/pencil, paper)                                       Writing journal                           Course texts (books, handouts, assignments, etc.)
Binder, folder, or other organizational system for hand-out readings

Approximate Schedule of Study and Curriculum
This schedule is a rough estimate and is subject to change.


Week one (1/13 - 1/17)
Reading and Reading Critically
Annotation, analysis, and reflection


Week two (1/21 - 1/24)
Note: school is not in session on Monday, 1/20, in observance of Martin Luther King, Jr. Day.
Constructing Meaningful Writing
Thesis, paragraph, and essay construction and organization


Week three (1/27- 1/31)
Integrating Reading and Writing
Reading and writing as dialogue


Week four (2/3 - 2/7)
Developing the Writer’s Process
Inspiration, response, and drafting


Week five (2/10 - 2/14)
Developing the Writer’s Process
Revision, editing, and proofreading


Week six (2/18 - 2/21)
Note: school is not in session on Monday, 2/17, in observance of Presidents’ Day.
Writing for Particular Situations
Styles and audiences


Week seven (2/24 - 2/28)
Using Reading and Writing for Critical Thinking
Literary and social analysis


Week eight (3/3 - 3/7)
Final Preparation



Miscellaneous
I reserve the right to amend or alter this syllabus; please note that any changes are made in an effort to create the best possible academic environment. I will notify students of any such changes as promptly as possible.

I wholeheartedly welcome feedback. Please do not hesitate to provide response to my teaching practices, assignments, etc.—but please provide this feedback while class is not in session.


















































[Please complete and return this section.]

During the course of this block, I hope to:

Ex.:     earn an 85 or higher in this course.
           attend every one of my classes. 





Identify at least two concrete, measurable academic goals.
Ex.:     become a more critical reader.
           be a more supportive sister. 







Identify at least two abstract, subjective, and/or personal goals.


I think my biggest asset as a student is:




I believe my greatest struggle as a student is:




I do best on assignments which:









I, _______________________________, hereby acknowledge that I have received and reviewed this
(print name)
syllabus. Any questions or concerns that have arisen have been addressed adequately.

I recognize that I am a student: I am capable of anything I encounter in this course, though it may be challenging—and it should be challenging. I will not state that I “can’t” do something, but that I “can’t yet.” I will ask for help when I need it, whether assistance is from Shane, from my peers, or from another responsible individual.

I will contribute to a classroom environment which is healthy, fun, welcoming, intellectual, emotional, and safe, among other things.

I will read things all the way through before signing them; if not, I will give Shane a candy bar of his choosing.

I will respect everyone’s educational opportunities; I will respect our building; I will respect my peers’ and instructors’ belongings; I will respect everyone’s right to make amends.

I will be the best person—intellectually, socially, and otherwise—that I can be.


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